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Post by Sigmaleph on Jul 7, 2010 22:27:35 GMT -5
I've been doing this thing for a bit where I write a short story on whatever idea crosses my mind and hope it turns out not to be shit, mostly to practice writing and experiment around with different things. I've got seven of them so far, I'm trying a one per week schedule (look at my sig! look at it!) So, if anyone is in the mood to provide criticism, I'm all ears. Or eyes. Heinrich LullSemi-normal buildup to a creepy ending. For a good, or terrible, reason. Taijitu and ChaoFull of religious symbolism, quite literally. NinjutsuToo much TV tropes VoidCharacters from a killed Whateley Academy fanfic imported to their own setting. A Vurokian's ReflectionsSequel to the last one. GradualityJournal-type writing experiment that didn't quite work out. The ArbiterA look into the life of some deities.
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Post by CtraK on Jul 9, 2010 8:35:06 GMT -5
I agree with what is presumably your own comment on "The Arbiter"; it's a strong idea, but it does seem to very suddenly skid to a st-
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Post by Sigmaleph on Jul 10, 2010 17:17:51 GMT -5
Yeah... I was kinda rushed for time due to my own arbitrary schedule. And laziness. And other stuff.
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