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Post by Admiral Lithp on Aug 30, 2009 0:42:13 GMT -5
Okay, before I can go any further with this, there's one idea that everyone needs to get used to. Namely, I pulled the first names of the main protagonist (Roatha) and the main antagonist (Senthose) right out of my ass. Unlike any other character, they're just meaningless gibberish.
And, since I get this question a lot, Roatha is pronounced "Ro-tha," not "Ro-a-tha."
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Post by Admiral Lithp on Sept 12, 2009 13:37:40 GMT -5
Chapter 1 up. My biggest problem was Thiera's explanation of the "Arts" (because everyone but Roatha is too pretentious to say, "magic"). Originally, it was supposed to be sort of a textbook definition. This time around, I thought I'd make it more airy & poetic, & get into the specifics later on. Personally, I don't like the way it sounds, but that was never my forte.
Well, regardless of what gets added, subtracted, or otherwise changed, I need to figure out what I'm doing with this. Right now, I'm thinking of either putting it on Deviantart, & then just linking the 2 forums there (starting a new topic here so that the link is on the first post, rather than 4, or 5, or whatever), or, alternatively, I could just make the permanent residence in this section.
I like this chapter. It raises a lot of questions, & refuses to answer any of them.
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Post by CtraK on Sept 28, 2009 13:05:57 GMT -5
You could always make a story blog. Not entirely sure how you'd go about do that but a friend of mine did that and it seems to work for her. Surely said blog itself is a clue, if ye has a link? Also, I'm thinking of doing that, but it's pointless whilst my Internet is still shit and my ideas are still nebulous. Expect that whole thing to kick off around 2037. |
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